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I Wonder..I wonder what It'd be like..
To go and commit suicide.

Will it be soft and gentle.
Or rough under the metal.

Will I feel relieved
Or hard to believe.

I'm not so sure anymore.
I just need to find a cure.

I wonder what it'd be like..
To go and commit suicide.

Will people start to cry
Or will they leave with a sigh.

Will my moments be treasured
Or my life span left measured.

I really don't know
But I'd really like to go.

I wonder what it'd be like..
To go and commit suicide.

Will my friends stand by my coffin
Or whither and be forgotten.

Will they look into my crying eyes.
Or my heart full of lies.

I just want to end it all.
I'll go j

Finally..People won't be there, even if I cried.
People wouldn't care, even if I died.

Everyone starts leaving.
While I continue on bleeding.

Nobody can hear my cries anymore.
I don't understand what life is worth living for.

I'm slowly giving up.
As I push the dagger through my gut.

I let out one last tear.
Before I cry out my only fear.

I've died here alone.
And no one is even home.

I'm left in the dark
While others seem to part.

I'm dead, I'm done.
Oh look, I've found a gun.

This will surely finish it.
No more life, not one bit.

I hold it to my head.
Boom, And I'm dead.

Finally, it's all over.

DeathI don't know why I'm writing this,
all I have to say,
Is death may be a life style,
That we'll all pick up one day

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Interludeby ~one-dryad

Literature / Poetry / Spiritual / Visual & Found Poetry

©2010-2013 ~one-dryad

Thank you to Alec Bell

for encouraging me to create a new Deviation featuring his haiku.

I'm so very honored, my friend.

Please find his Deviation, Burial, here: [link]

as well as his incomparable gallery: [link] .

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~Natai Jan 13, 2011

I love it...

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~one-dryad Jan 15, 2011 Hobbyist Photographer

Thank you so much, Sarah! That means a lot.

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~PrettyCrazy Jan 3, 2011 Hobbyist Writer

And that is why everybody loves snow: because underneath, a whole new life, with new promises and dreams, is waiting.

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~one-dryad Jan 15, 2011 Hobbyist Photographer

Most definitely. Thank you so much, An. On behalf of both of us.

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*Miarath Dec 23, 2010

Beautifully done.

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~one-dryad Jan 15, 2011 Hobbyist Photographer

Thank you so much, Mia! From both of us.

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*Miarath Jan 15, 2011

You're most welcome.

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