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Coming Apart, A Visual Poem

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Coming Apart


1.

Something’s

torn
loose in
me:

finding its way into ink,
opening my throat.

I guess I won’t

shatter

(entirely)
--unless--

I persist in

storming the

tide?


2.


On Sunset Cliffs,
I was beyond shaking,

carved

further
& further
into stone.

You spoke of thunder

--palpable distance--

as we gazed upon a sea that was

seething:


what seemed
solid
could’ve gone at any moment.

I kept wishing
it was

absolutely

pouring on


us.
Image size
2272x1612px 405.07 KB
Make
FUJIFILM
Model
FinePix S5100
Shutter Speed
10/6400 second
Aperture
F/7.0
Focal Length
57 mm
ISO Speed
64
Date Taken
Jan 1, 2004, 12:04:14 AM
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peterkopher's avatar
I've been there, metaphorically - very recently in fact...